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Unpacking Your Assumptions about Fiction

ByJennifer Lawler

If you’ve ever taken a class from me, you know that I have a pathological hatred of using questions in editorial queries. By this I mean asking questions like, “What is Joe’s motivation?” where you are, or think you are, asking the author to address the problem of Joe’s lack of motivation. Use statements instead…

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Dipping Your Toe into Developmental Editing

ByJennifer Lawler

One of the best ways to dip your toe into the developmental editing waters is by beta reading. This is basically reading a manuscript and responding to it: where you were confused, where you lost interest, what character you enjoyed the most. How to Beta Read When you’re doing a beta read, you’re not trying…

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How Are Beta Reading, Manuscript Evaluation, and Developmental Editing Different?

ByJennifer Lawler

Aspiring editors sometimes aren’t sure of the differences between different types of services they could offer. Three of the main big-picture services editors offer are beta reading, manuscript evaluation, and developmental editing. Here’s how they differ. Beta Reading Beta reading is a type of reader feedback on a manuscript. If you’re familiar with writers’ workshops,…

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Letting go of mistakes

ByJennifer Lawler

Once upon a time, I trained in the martial arts. When I was a brown belt, I hit someone pretty hard and broke his rib. We were supposed to demonstrate excellent physical control, and accidentally breaking someone’s rib does not equal excellent physical control. I felt terrible for causing him pain and for not having…

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Doing quick manuscript evaluations

ByJennifer Lawler

I once had a manuscript land on my desk was written in such an abstract way (“glorious silver moon moments brandish sparkles”) (not a direct quote) that I couldn’t figure out how to begin to edit it. This was for a publisher client who would send projects my way without giving me a chance to…

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Understanding Reader Expectations & Genres

ByJennifer Lawler

One key to identifying DE problems is understanding reader expectations, and reader expectations are closely tied to genre. Understanding Reader Expectations When I read a romance, I expect it to end happily ever after. I don’t care if you have a great idea for a heart-breaking ending. I don’t want a heartbreaking ending. I want…

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Don’t Wait to Start

ByJennifer Lawler

Once upon a time, I was a magazine editor, and every year the January issue would include some form of “New Year, New You!” article. I probably used that exact title more than once. People often use the beginning of something to start a new habit, such as learning a new skill. The start of…

Becoming a Professional Editor

ByJennifer Lawler

A colleague recently mentioned an encounter with a proofreader who’d been hired to proofread a laid-out book (that is, in PDF form). The proofreader asked for the Word file to work from. That’s not how proofreading a laid-out book works. A friend had a client who wanted a developmental editor who could edit in Scribner….

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More Powerful than AI

ByJennifer Lawler

AI is going to kill routine jobs. But it won’t kill jobs that require expertise and human judgment. That’s why it’s important for editors to move beyond basic skills like proofreading. It’s not enough to say, “But homophones!” Most people will accept a small error rate if it means they can save three thousand dollars….