Line Editing: Dialogue

In fiction, dialogue is used to forward the plot and reveal character. But authors often get bogged down in writing boring, mundane conversations that may reflect how people actually talk, but aren’t very interesting for readers. Helping authors sharpen dialogue can make a good book great. Sharper dialogue engages readers and keeps them immersed in…

If you’re a copy editor who knows how to copyedit dialogue, a line like this: “I would never let you go.” She said. . . . probably causes you physical pain. So you’d fix it. But as a copy editor, you typically don’t make a lot of content changes, especially in fiction. If you’re tired…