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What makes a good editor?
Writers often assume that being an editor can’t be all that different from being a writer. But writing and editing are two very different skills. What makes a good editor is not the same as what makes a good writer. Being a writer has certainly helped me understand what the writing and revision process is like…
How to stop attracting the wrong clients
“I’m not teaching the whiners anymore.” A friend of mine who also runs an online education company said this to me a couple of weeks ago when we were talking about the direction we wanted to take our respective businesses. Personally, I don’t get the kind of students you’d call whiners—that is, people who complain…
Revision letter template
Follow this basic template to write a revision letter that will help the author successfully revise their work: Dear AUTHOR: Thank you for giving me the opportunity to work on TITLE. I enjoyed THING. [Begin with praise about the novel. State something specific that the author does well. Don’t just say, “I really enjoyed this…
Revision letter basics
The revision letter is what the author turns to first when they’ve received your edit to understand your overall feedback regarding what needs to be done in the revision. It guides the author’s revision. It can also be used as a standalone tool for conveying big-picture concerns to authors when they don’t have the budget…
Framework for fiction editorial query
A good rule of thumb for a fiction editorial query is to make statements, not ask questions. By focusing on making statements, rather than questions, in your editorial queries, you begin to unpack your assumptions about what literature is, what makes a story good, and so on. I often recommend using the three-party query template…
Turning an editorial question into an editorial query
It’s very common for newer dev editors to write editorial queries that say things like, “What is Joe’s motivation?” but that does not give the author sufficient guidance to do the revision so it is not an effective editorial query. But it is a perfectly fine place to start. The first thing to do is…
How to handle potential client problems
Getting paid to do the work is how we stay in business. It’s very important to be prepared to handle potential client problems with payment. Payment in Full When working with indie authors, I expect full payment in advance, so I don’t have problems with people who don’t make a final payment, but not everyone…
Beginning Developmental Editing for Fiction | DE 1 – 6: Developmental Editing for Fiction | DE 3: Writing Effective Editorial Queries
3 Main Types of Editorial Queries
As developmental editors, we use three main types of queries, and it’s important to distinguish among them so that the author isn’t confused about what needs to be done. What we don’t want to do is just write reaction queries: “John seems disappointed here.” Well, so what? What does the author need to do about…
